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My Fairytale adventure by *Ella-kayleigh:iconElla-kayleigh:

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I've never once stopped believing in magic,
Never once stopped believing in right and good,

And while I never did find my fairytale adventure,
I still feel that I have found something worthwhile,

Closing my eyes,
I feel the sensation of the wind
By being aware of my surroundings,
I learn of places that I've never known of,
From eating new things, I experince new tastes
By sharing a joke with you, I get to see you smile

Every single part of this becomes a new memory,
Every single day is suddenly a whole new beginning,

I don't what tomorrow will bring
But I will live it with my head held high

And who knows?
It's not too late for my fairytale adventure to begin.
©2009-2010 *Ella-kayleigh
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Just because not all poems have to focus on depressing things. ;D

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~Macushla Apr 15, 2009, 11:25:06 AM
That was so awesome! I like that you used commas instead of periods for pauses, kinda makes it flow better than using periods. :> (if people read poetry out loud like I do. xD)
I don't think I've read a poem on dA that wasn't depressing in a loooooong time. Kinda made my day if you know what I mean. xD
:hug:

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Your dream must be bigger than your fear.
:iconella-kayleigh:
*Ella-kayleigh Apr 15, 2009, 2:41:47 PM
Lol! I do the same thing which is why I did it that way! We're too similar! It's almost scary! xD

Glad to know that it made your day even just a bit more brighter. It makes me feel that writing this poem was worthwhile if it makes just one person smile. ;D
I think it's sad how many depressing poems on DA there... this poem was actually done in protest to some friends who wrote such depressing poetry on DA which involved the keywords 'sorrow' 'slit' 'scream' and 'broken wings'. =P
I was like... NUU! YOU'RE NOT A BIRD DAMMNIT! STOP BEING DEPRESSING! *Bitchslap*
:giggle:

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:iconmacushla:
~Macushla Apr 15, 2009, 11:20:13 PM
It just makes me D8< when I see depressing poems everywhere. Especially when they're badly written. :l

OH WOE IS ME AS I LET SORROW POUR FROM THE SLITS IN MY WRISTS WHILE I SCREAM IN PAIN FROM MY BROKEN WINGS.
Sadly that's a summary of about 99% of poetry on here.
Lmfao, bitch slap! :slap:

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Your dream must be bigger than your fear.
:iconella-kayleigh:
*Ella-kayleigh Apr 17, 2009, 1:57:32 AM
:rofl: we should start up our own little 'bad poem club' where all we do is write seriously depressing badly written poems.. xD

But yeah.. I wouldn't mind the depressing poems so much if everyone wasn't so god damn depressed and such.. .or writing them badly..


Btw.. nice poem.. it made my heart bleed ;_;
*attempts to slit wrist with funny blade toy from mcdonalds* 8D

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:iconmacushla:
~Macushla Apr 18, 2009, 6:47:33 PM
We so should. xD

They wouldn't be so bad if most of them weren't focused on razors and blood. You can be depressed and feel so many different emotions (and do so many different things, not just self harm :l ).....and yeah, writing them with proper grammar and syntax would help. .__.

That poem totally came from all my pent up teenage angst. D:< You should so use a butter knife, you can see your angsty expression in the reflection while you try to slit your wrists. C:
ANGST ANGST ANGST.
>:C

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Your dream must be bigger than your fear.
:iconella-kayleigh:
*Ella-kayleigh Apr 23, 2009, 3:25:43 PM
:rofl: *is too busy laughing to come up with a good response.
-oh wait. I'm not laughing! I'm angsting! No, REALLY.

Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst Angst

XD

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